Wednesday, October 3, 2012

SELLING YOUR BOOK’S MOVIE AND TV RIGHTS – WHAT YOU NEED TO KNOW


I’ve been in “development hell” for 16 years, but I’m not complaining. While Hollywood has not yet made any of my books into a feature film, TV movie (known in the trade as an MOW, or Movie of the Week) or series, I still get paid for my writing being optioned. In fact, it forms part of my yearly income.
If you’ve ever wondered how something gets made into a film—and how your work can be tapped for one, too—here’s the inside scoop on options.
—Article by Fred Rosen

What exactly is an option?

A rental. A production company or studio reserves the right to make your work into a film, MOW or TV show for a specific length of time. In the past, the standard option was for a year, with two renewable one-year options. Taking advantage of the recent recession, producers have now been able to negotiate the first option to 18 months. Regardless, each time a company picks up the option, you get paid just for sitting on your tushie. In the meantime, they’ll try to secure the money to make the adaptation and get someone to write the script (though it probably won’t be you—Hollywood prefers to use its own writers to adapt work).

What can get optioned?

Just about anything. Published novels and nonfiction books. Magazine articles. Short stories. Unpublished work can break through, too, when someone who has a connection with a production company discovers something and passes it on (Frank Capra based It’s a Wonderful Life on an unpublished short story by Philip Van Doren Stern). But you should generally focus on getting published first—because the print imprimatur still demands the highest price when optioned.

How much is an option worth?

Options start at $500 and go up. In today’s market, $5,000 is excellent. It’s impossible to offer an average because it depends on so many factors, the most important being how much the production company wants the work. As my professor A.D. “Art” Murphy used to tell us, the movie business operates on the junkie/pusher principle: Someone has something that someone else desperately wants.

Do I need an agent to make the option sale?

Generally, yes. As you may know, there are both literary agents (who specialize in book publishing) and film agents. Many writers have both. If you have a literary agent, look at your contract and see if the agent gets points for a film sale; if so, encourage her to send your work to a film agent she’s familiar with (the two will split the commission). If you don’t have an agent, it’s fine to query film agents directly. They’re always looking for salable stuff to pitch to Hollywood. Be straightforward in your pitch: Briefly summarize the work to be optioned, where it’s published—or not—and your bio.
It’s also possible, though less common, to make a sale yourself and later obtain a film agent or lawyer to negotiate the details. You can find out what production companies buy—and get executives’ contact info—by going to their websites.
No matter how you do it, in the end, you’ll still be waiting for that fateful green light.

What’s the green light?

In the movie business, it’s the colossal step of money being put on the table to produce a project. Few options actually lead to a green light. Hollywood has so much money, producers can afford to buy a lot more than they need, and then cherry-pick their projects. That’s why you want to get as much as possible up front for the option itself. In the rare cases where you get a green light, you will get paid the purchase price. For now, think of it as Monopoly money. When you’re negotiating the option amount, the producer will dangle lots of zeros on the purchase price, while trying to keep the actual option figure at a minimum. (Good agents will fight this. And for their services, they’ll get 10 percent of the option and 10 percent of the purchase price. A lawyer will get 5 percent across the board.)

How much do you make if you get a green light?

The purchase price is usually 2–3 percent of the production’s budget, with a cap. So, at 2 percent, if a film is budgeted at $10 million, on the first day of principal photography you get a check for $200,000. If the cap is $225,000, that means even if the film is made for $50 million, your fee is still $225,000. For MOWs, a basic cable MOW is in the $25,000 range. Premium cable doubles that to $50,000. (If you luck into a series, you also get paid per episode.) Then again, like many writers, you could find yourself in development hell—the period when you’re waiting for the green light. But there are worse places you could be.

So what’s the key to getting your work optioned?

The first rule in the business is you need good product. And, on a psychological level, if you believe your writing is good enough to be optioned, people will pick up on your confidence. (On the flip side, they also pick up on your desperation—this from a writer who has been desperate on more than one occasion.)
All told, you have to have the innate belief that you are unique, and are offering something that no one else can. Frank Capra of It’s a Wonderful Life fame taught me that. I knew him; he was a friend. He once saved my writing life when I was ready to jump off that bridge.


Go forward and win!

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Tuesday, October 2, 2012

WHEN TO USE SWEAR WORDS IN YOUR WRITING

by Morgan Hunt



Remember the George Carlin bit about seven words you can never say on TV? Well, never say never. Those words–and their second cousins–crop up routinely on cable stations, as well as on the silver screen, on CDs and in modern novels.
I’m not convinced the proliferation of obscenities and profanity in our culture is a plus. As a parent, I cringe at our culture’s tin-ear tolerance for obscenities, but Puritanical censorship isn’t the answer; swearwords express things humans want to say. To me, they’re to writing what rain is to the land: you need them occasionally to make your created world bloom with color. But too much can be dreary or destructive. To navigate between prude and crude in my own writing, I ask myself these three questions when I hit a roadblock:

Hell Girl: Two Mirrors Episode 18

1. DOES IT WORK FOR THE READER? My mystery series is intended as an intelligent woman’s beach read; my target readers are college-educated female Boomers. Intuition told me this demographic would tolerate occasional swearwords but would shun their constant or intense use. Research confirmed my take on my audience’s tolerance of bleep-ables.
With my readers in mind, I decided my amateur sleuth would swirl azure tints into her verbal palette but would rarely paint the world blue. In Fool on the Hill, I questioned whether to have her quote a particular Humphrey Bogart quip without censoring his use of the f-word. I chose to allow it because it told the reader something specific about her character, which brings me to the next question.
2. DOES IT WORK FOR THE CHARACTER? Are swearwords essential to help the character squirm, grow or revel on paper? Are they not only an acceptable choice, but the best choice for a character and circumstance?
“When rewriting, I do scrutinize a character’s word choices to make sure the language rings true to the situation and evokes the character’s personality and mood,” says bestselling novelist Lolly Winston. “If a character’s swearing a lot, she may seem more harsh or bitter than I’ve intended. For example, I found myself toning down Elinor’s language in Happiness Sold Separately, because I wanted her to be acerbic and funny, not bitter or hostile.”       
You want me to say what?!
Writers sometimes kindle scenes of eroticism with swearwords. But books like Mary Gordon’s Spending and Gabriel Garca Mrquez’ Love in the Time of Cholera grill characters to perfection with few obscene flames, even in the most lascivious moments. Inspired by such writers, I allow my protagonist to unleash her libido sans Anglo Saxon bluntness.
The sometimes currish murder suspects in my mysteries present a greater challenge. We live in the real world; those who disrespect human life enough to kill aren’t going to balk at a word rhyming with duck.
Certainly swearwords have been used by some of the greats to portray unsavory characters. In Tom Wolfe’s I Am Charlotte Simmons, there are the f-word conversations of frat boys and campus jocks. Its repetition simulates a dialect, which Wolfe calls “f*** patois.” His use of swearwords is intentional; it lays bare the rebellion and arrogance of the privileged students who choose such coarse idiom.
But moral rot doesn’t compel verbal raunch. Thomas Harris’ Hannibal Lecter doesn’t say, “I ate his liver with some f*****g beans.” If Lecter spoke that way, we could perceive him as crude or inarticulate. Though Harris puts verbal venom in the mouths of other characters, the f-word he gives Lecter is “fava.” We’re forced to accept Lecter as a man of education and refinement, making his malignance all the more chilling.
If your readers will accept obscenities and your character could conceivably say them, your last determinant may be one of conscience.
3. DOES IT ABRIDGE MY INTEGRITY? My spiritual beliefs influence my willingness to use swearwords. So does my concept of what it means to use my talent worthily. Some words I simply won’t use. But I’ll use most of the words on Carlin’s notorious list when they fit the character and situation.
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Writing requires fine-tuning; paying due attention. A writer knows when words–obscene or otherwise–just plain work. Alan Russell, author of The Fat Innkeeper, which won the Critics’ Choice Award and The Lefty (for humor in a mystery), agrees.
“In that book, when my protagonist encounters a beached whale at the oceanfront hotel where he works, he exclaims, Call me f*****g Ishmael!’ I never second-guessed myself on that because it seemed absolutely right to me.” If it’s appropriate for your reader, and if the character and situation call for it, go ahead and swear.

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MARKETING A SCREENPLAY


If you don’t have an agent, and have no contacts in the business, you can still market your script on your own. Before you try, however, take one preparatory step: Register your script with the Writer’s Guild of America. Registration provides a dated record of the writer’s claim to authorship and can be used as evidence in legal disputes about authorship.
If you want to break into television, it’s generally not a good idea to write scripts for a series of your invention. Full-time, experienced, professional writers earn monumental salaries doing just that; why compete with them? Instead, tape several shows of an existing series. Watch them repeatedly. Learn who the characters are, how they would behave ion a situation. One writer even advised typing up the script as you watch an episode to help you understand the flow of the dialogue.
Also watch the credits of a show you enjoy, noting the names of the producers. You can write to them, asking them to read your script. While the number of scripts bought from freelancers in television is small, it does happen.
“I’ve never met a producer who wouldn’t kill to get a great script out of the blue sky one morning,” J. Michael Straczynski wrote in his Complete Book of Scriptwriting. After targeting a show, Straczynski recommends writing polite query letters to producers or story editors (usually people who rewrite scripts and deal with freelancers), explaining your fondness for and familiarity with the show and your desire to send a spec script.
At any given time, certain shows are hot markets for spec scripts. If you have a friend who knows anyone working in television, you can try to find out which shows “everybody” is writing spec scripts for. Many suggest that it’s better to pick a show that you enjoy, that is climbing in the ratings, but that isn’t a hit. After all, there are only so many Everybody Loves Raymond scripts any one person can stand to read.
Once you write a script, remember another Hollywood paradox: Rarely is a spec script for a show ever bought and produced by that particular show. In fact, many writers advise against even trying to show it to anyone with the show. Why? Because the writers of that show know their characters better than anyone else ever could, and rarely can an outsider create a script better than they. One writer suggested that it’s rarer still for producer to admit someone outside his show even could. So, if you want to write for CSI, you need to write a script for NYPD Blue or another police/investigation drama and submit that as your spec script to the producers of CSI.
Then, even if your script is rejected, it may be a good enough calling card to get you invited to pitch other ideas to the producers.

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  •  Introduction
  •  Development
  •  Climax
  •  Conclusion
  • Character development 
  •  Mid point development
Critiques also provide suggestions for improvements and enhancement. 

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Other services are at regular price.



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Monday, October 1, 2012

HOW TO “UP THE STAKES” FOR YOUR MAIN CHARACTER


Don’t be afraid to make things hard on your characters. You should always come up with several different problems to choose from. Who knows; you may even throw numerous dilemmas at them at once. Think about the type of story you’re writing and the genre you want to work in: What kinds of problems do characters usually have in these stories? How can you make your story different from the rest? Serious problems and goals will be crucial in helping to drive your story forward, so you’ll want to make them good.
IDENTIFY CHARACTER MOTIVATION
People—and characters—tend to move toward pleasure and away from pain, so consider:
    •     Are your main characters moving toward pleasure or away from pain? Or both?
    •     What reward awaits the hero in the end?
    •     What is motivating the hero to press on?
I need motivation!
Don’t just give a generic reply like, “The hero wants to save the village from the bad guys and avenge his friend.” Go deeper than that. Ask yourself, “Why does he want this?” Your answer should relate to your character’s core traits, flaws and goals. For instance, “The hero needs to feel needed. He needs to save the village to prove his self-worth, and he wants to feel the satisfaction and power of avenging his friend’s death.”
Now we have a much deeper level at work. The hero is moving away from the pain of low self-worth and toward the pleasure of being needed and powerful, as well as toward the pleasure of earning admiration from everyone in the village. Doesn’t that give you a bit more to write about?
What if your character just wants to have the satisfaction of doing the right thing? Still, ask yourself: Why?
    •     Because the character’s mother told him to always do the right thing? (He wants to please his mother and be worthy of her love.)
    •     Because the character wants to make up for something he did wrong long ago? (He seeks forgiveness so he can leave the pain behind him.)
    •     Because the character wants to believe that good always prevails? (She needs to feel like order has
been restored so she can avoid the pain of uncertainty and happenstance.)
Zan Sayonara Zetsubou Sensei
Can you guess whats next?
Find the deeper meaning. Of course we’ve all seen the old story in which a hero slays the dragon to win the hand of a princess, but why does he bother? This princess is usually someone who refuses to accept any man, but is forced to marry the slayer of the dragon. She’s considered unattainable. But if he attains her, he’ll win so many other things besides her hand—does that include self-esteem, admiration, money, power? You decide, of course. These are all rewards the hero can be seeking, but each one implies different reasons for wanting to attain it.
INSERT CLIFFHANGERS
Cliffhangers can really beef up a sagging story, and they’re great for when you find yourself without any obvious next steps. How will you keep the reader interested? It can seem so daunting.
The answer is to come up with an event and delay paying it off. Set up the event so that the reader truly doesn’t know whether or not things will work out. There has to be a question in the reader’s mind about what will happen. Some classic cliffhangers include:
    •     The ticking clock (when the hero must do something in a certain amount of time and we don’t know if it’s possible to accomplish it).
    •     The character on the verge of making a hasty major decision (perhaps she doesn’t have all the information yet and we want her to wait, but it doesn’t look like she will).
    •     The interruption, either in the form of another character or an event that throws the heroine off track (the heroine is about to find her husband upstairs cheating with another woman when her neighbor stops by to talk, keeping her downstairs, and we don’t know if she’ll go upstairs and finally learn the truth; ringing phones and tea kettles usually fall into this category, and for this reason should be avoided).
    •     The unexpected problem just when the resolution seems on the horizon (the hero and heroine seem likely to get together, which would mean “the end,” when all of a sudden numerous problems are dropped into their laps, and we now question if it will ever work out).
The goal here is to leave the reader wondering about what could possibly happen next, so that she won’t be able to put the book down. You have to be careful that you make this seem seamless, though. It has to feel natural and organic to the plot; otherwise, the reader will get upset with you and feel manipulated. (Hey, if it were easy, every book would be a page-turner!) You are creating anticipation in the reader. This anticipation has to be paid off at some point.
So when and how do you cut back to the cliffhanger? That’s another choice you have to make on your own. You don’t want to wait too long, or it will seem as if the entire plot has come to a screeching halt. If you go back too quickly, you will lose your opportunity to keep the reader hooked. This is why writing is an art form. You have to feel the story, feel the pacing, understand the genre and make these decisions. 
You can watch a dramatic TV show to see how they use cliffhangers before commercial breaks or watch some movie trailers to see how they try to entice you into the theater.
INTENSIFY THE MAIN PROBLEM
Starting your story with a compelling problem is only the first step. You’ve got to keep upping the ante, intensifying the conflict as the problem continues to grow and grow. You do this by weaving in believable and nuanced barriers, complications and situations.
This is bad!
    •     Barriers occur when the character tries something that doesn’t work. The action is stopped for a moment and the reader wonders, What will the character do?
    •     Complications are action points that don’t pay off immediately. The hero is busy with the main plot line and all of a sudden a new element, character or conflict drops into the mix.
    •     Situations simply are using one of the dramatic predicaments to move the story forward and add tension.
Pull out any outlines and plot worksheets, and review your story problem’s charted course. Now, deepen the well by adding in a mixture of the three different types of conflict just described. Push yourself and see what happens.
Don’t feel too bad about making life harder for your characters. Sometimes we just love our characters too darn much! Other times we identify with them too deeply. This is what makes conflict such a chore. You don’t want your heroine to face having her son hit by a car; you just can’t bring yourself to write it, but you know in your gut that it has to be done. You know the story calls for it, or something like it. Remember: You are doing your entire story—and your character—an injustice if you don’t write it.


Go forward and win!

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Screenplays

Critique: $50.00 Flat Fee, 

 Includes evaluating the basis elements of a script
  •  Introduction
  •  Development
  •  Climax
  •  Conclusion
  • Character development 
  •  Mid point development
Critiques also provide suggestions for improvements and enhancement. 

Payments are made by Paypal or cashier check by mail.


Other services are at regular price.



Query Letters: $25.00 Flat Fee  


Editing: $45.00 Flat Fee
  •  Evaluating formatting to industry standards
  •  Spelling, grammar, punctuation, sentence structure, etc.

Turnaround time:

Editing: 2 weeks
Critique: 2 weeks
Query Letters: 2 weeks

Feel free to contact me at ahicks4298@msn.com.
Feel to call me at (360) 696-4298. Ask for Frances.

I also critique and edit books. I am currently organizing the service prices for working on books. If you are interested in me critiquing or editing a novel you have written, feel free contact me.
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