Pointers On Writing Good Dialog

Dear readers,

Here's some info on writing dialog. I got it in my email the other day. It reflects much of what I tell writers.

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The 7 Tools of Dialogue
	Brian A. Klems Online Editor WritersDigest.com @BrianKlems

Today's newsletter is from the amazing writing James Scott Bell. Check it out (and check out his book filled with practical writing advice, Conflict & Suspense).

My neighbor John loves to work on his hot rod. He's an automotive whiz and tells me he can hear when something is not quite right with the engine. He doesn't hesitate to pop the hood, grab his bag of tools and start to tinker. He'll keep at it until the engine sounds just the way he wants it to.

That's not a bad way to think about dialogue. We can usually sense when it needs work. What fiction writers often lack, however, is a defined set of tools they can put to use on problem areas.

So here's a set-my seven favorite dialogue tools. Stick them in your writer's toolbox for those times you need to pop the hood and tinker with your characters' words.   Read more... 

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